Hi Kimberly, you did a great job on your elevator pitch! I was very impressed with your demeanor and confidence in your first pitch so overall you did not have a lot to revise presentation or knowledge-wise in my opinion. You seemed very energetic this second attempt and seem to enjoy it much more also! Overall, you did a great job on your second attempt! Keep up the good work.
Hello Kim, you did a really good job on your second elevator pitch. You really showed great confidence and showed that you knew what you were talking about. You improved a lot from your first elevator pitch earlier this semester. You were very clear, concise, and dressed professionally. I also agree that first impressions are very important. Keep up the great work!
Hey Kim, this was a really good elevator pitch! The audience can clearly see your confidence through the video. Additionally, your energy is great which shows you actually care about seeing your business become successful. Lastly, you also looked the part by dressing like a professional. Overall awesome job and keep up the good work!
Hi Kimberly, you did a great job on your elevator pitch! I was very impressed with your demeanor and confidence in your first pitch so overall you did not have a lot to revise presentation or knowledge-wise in my opinion. You seemed very energetic this second attempt and seem to enjoy it much more also! Overall, you did a great job on your second attempt! Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHello Kim, you did a really good job on your second elevator pitch. You really showed great confidence and showed that you knew what you were talking about. You improved a lot from your first elevator pitch earlier this semester. You were very clear, concise, and dressed professionally. I also agree that first impressions are very important. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHey Kim, this was a really good elevator pitch! The audience can clearly see your confidence through the video. Additionally, your energy is great which shows you actually care about seeing your business become successful. Lastly, you also looked the part by dressing like a professional. Overall awesome job and keep up the good work!
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